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作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-8-29 11:26:02     标题: √Eminem-Stan,喜欢阿姆的请进,第一次发歌,多多指教哈~

第一次发歌,自己感觉录得还可以,大家听听。。。

其实自己还录了几首,像什么Lose yourself,Mockingbird,Sing for the moment之类的歌,喜欢听的话以后继续。。。


Eminem & Dido  - Stan

Chorus: Dido

My tea's gone cold I'm wondering why I..
got out of bed at all
The morning rain clouds up my window..
and I can't see at all
And even if I could it'll all be gray,
but your picture on my wall
It reminds me, that it's not so bad,
it's not so bad..

[Eminem as 'Stan']
Dear Slim, I wrote but you still ain't callin
I left my cell, my pager, and my home phone at the bottom
I sent two letters back in autumn, you must not-a got 'em
There probably was a problem at the post office or somethin
Sometimes I scribble addresses too sloppy when I jot 'em
but anyways; 1234 it, what's been up? Man how's your daughter?
My girlfriend's pregnant too, I'm bout to be a father
If I have a daughter, guess what I'ma call her?
I'ma name her Bonnie
I read about your Uncle Ronnie too I'm sorry
I had a friend kill himself over some bitch who didn't want him
I know you probably hear this everyday, but I'm your biggest fan
I even got the underground shit that you did with Skam
I got a room full of your posters and your pictures man
I like the shit you did with Rawkus too, that shit was fat
Anyways, I hope you get this man, hit me back,
just to chat, truly yours, your biggest fan
This is Stan

{Chorus: Dido}

[Eminem as 'Stan']
Dear Slim, you still ain't called or wrote, I hope you have a chance
I ain't mad - I just think it's 1234ED UP you don't answer fans
If you didn't wanna talk to me outside your concert
you didn't have to, but you coulda signed an autograph for Matthew
That's my little brother man, he's only six years old
We waited in the blistering cold for you,
four hours and you just said, "No."
That's pretty shitty man - you're like his 1234in idol
He wants to be just like you man, he likes you more than I do
I ain't that mad though, I just don't like bein lied to
Remember when we met in Denver - you said if I'd write you
you would write back - see I'm just like you in a way
I never knew my father neither;
he used to always cheat on my mom and beat her
I can relate to what you're saying in your songs
so when I have a shitty day, I drift away and put 'em on
cause I don't really got shit else so that shit helps when I'm depressed
I even got a tattoo of your name across the chest
Sometimes I even cut myself to see how much it bleeds
It's like adrenaline, the pain is such a sudden rush for me
See everything you say is real, and I respect you cause you tell it
My girlfriend's jealous cause I talk about you 24/7
But she don't know you like I know you Slim, no one does
She don't know what it was like for people like us growin up
You gotta call me man, I'll be the biggest fan you'll ever lose
Sincerely yours, Stan -- P.S.
We should be together too

{Chorus: Dido}

[Eminem as 'Stan']
Dear Mister-I'm-Too-Good-To-Call-Or-Write-My-Fans,
this'll be the last package I ever send your ass
It's been six months and still no word - I don't deserve it?
I know you got my last two letters;
I wrote the addresses on 'em perfect
So this is my cassette I'm sending you, I hope you hear it
I'm in the car right now, I'm doing 90 on the freeway
Hey Slim, I drank a fifth of vodka, you dare me to drive?
You know the song by Phil Collins, "In the Air of the Night"
about that guy who coulda saved that other guy from drowning
but didn't, then Phil saw it all, then at a a show he found him?
That's kinda how this is, you coulda rescued me from drowning
Now it's too late - I'm on a 1000 downers now, I'm drowsy
and all I wanted was a lousy letter or a call
I hope you know I ripped +ALL+ of your pictures off the wall
I love you Slim, we coulda been together, think about it
You ruined it now, I hope you can't sleep and you dream about it
And when you dream I hope you can't sleep and you SCREAM about it
I hope your conscience EATS AT YOU and you can't BREATHE without me
See Slim; {*screaming*} Shut up bitch! I'm tryin to talk!
Hey Slim, that's my girlfriend screamin in the trunk
but I didn't slit her throat, I just tied her up, see I ain't like you
cause if she suffocates she'll suffer more, and then she'll die too
Well, gotta go, I'm almost at the bridge now
Oh shit, I forgot, how'm I supposed to send this shit out?
{*car tires squeal*} {*CRASH*}
.. {*brief silence*} .. {*LOUD splash*}

{Chorus: Dido}


Dear Stan, I meant to write you sooner but I just been busy
You said your girlfriend's pregnant now, how far along is she?
Look, I'm really flattered you would call your daughter that
and here's an autograph for your brother,
I wrote it on the Starter cap
I'm sorry I didn't see you at the show, I musta missed you
Don't think I did that shit intentionally just to diss you
But what's this shit you said about you like to cut your wrists too?
I say that shit just clownin dogg,
c'mon - how 1234ed up is you?
You got some issues Stan, I think you need some counseling
to help your ass from bouncing off the walls when you get down some
And what's this shit about us meant to be together?
That type of shit'll make me not want us to meet each other
I really think you and your girlfriend need each other
or maybe you just need to treat her better
I hope you get to read this letter, I just hope it reaches you in time
before you hurt yourself, I think that you'll be doin just fine
if you relax a little, I'm glad I inspire you but Stan
why are you so mad? Try to understand, that I do want you as a fan
I just don't want you to do some crazy shit
I seen this one shit on the news a couple weeks ago that made me sick
Some dude was drunk and drove his car over a bridge
and had his girlfriend in the trunk, and she was pregnant with his kid
and in the car they found a tape, but they didn't say who it was to
Come to think about, his name was.. it was you
Damn!

[ 本帖最后由 ╋╋╋╋╋╋ 于 2007-10-23 10:20 编辑 ]
作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-8-29 11:30:33

怎么不能试听啊,?? 怎么弄啊???

哪位高手指点一下啊~~~
作者: 康佛神    时间: 2007-8-29 12:06:17     标题: 哈哈

我刚开始也遇到这个问题
传附件浏览完后别点[插入]就OK了
作者: hotdude    时间: 2007-8-29 13:20:43

很经典的一首,可惜我下载太慢!没法听!建议大家以后先把歌发到分贝网,然后把URL贴到这里,我就不用等着缓冲了,呵呵```
作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-8-31 20:27:53

弄好了,但是好像有些慢,大家听听吧
作者: annbo    时间: 2007-8-31 21:38:12

RAP得很溜了,就是感觉不够放开,有点害羞的感觉,呵呵`

已经不错了,再次大胆点放开来录吧,支持你!
作者: 康佛神    时间: 2007-8-31 21:50:08

没有理由不顶下哈
作者: djpanda    时间: 2007-8-31 21:53:25

很经典的 一个说唱
搂住的后期不错
但是感情还应该再强一点
还有 发音 把元音发的再圆满一些
节奏感 不错
继续努力
作者: zoro2014    时间: 2007-9-3 18:21:00

唱完这首嘴巴都掉了吧??
长达6分多钟
楼主唱RAP还挺强的!
作者: liukun177    时间: 2007-9-3 19:19:40

真的不错了 阿姆的歌确实不好唱
顶楼主哈
再接再厉~~
作者: becky64    时间: 2007-9-4 00:59:12

等死我了,终于能听了.这个不好唱捏
顶一下
作者: wispering    时间: 2007-9-5 20:04:28

很经典的 一个说唱
搂住的后期不错
但是感情还应该再强一点
还有 发音 把元音发的再圆满一些
节奏感 不错
继续努力
作者: dioiuf    时间: 2007-9-5 23:19:42

高难度阿,过来拜一拜。
作者: 熊猫奶爸    时间: 2007-9-5 23:41:04

还真是神似EMINEM   节奏掌握的恰到火候
作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-10-19 12:11:30

一个月没来了,果然沉了。。。
作者: 龌龊的饺子    时间: 2007-10-27 03:49:25

很喜欢的一首歌,唱得不错,就是大半夜的没耐心听完,哈哈
作者: 边缘时代    时间: 2007-10-27 03:53:22

呵呵,挺好听的.支持LZ.
作者: 維亞    时间: 2007-10-27 10:42:28

有感觉哦~~看得出来有用心
唱得比我好多了·~呵呵
期待Sing for the moment哦!
作者: xzq422    时间: 2007-10-27 14:11:50

牛人啊~~~他的歌都呢能唱~!!
作者: agari    时间: 2008-5-27 17:34:45

楼主加油,有功夫!!!!!
作者: JOHNSHOW1983    时间: 2008-7-23 22:37:57

不错!!!!!谢谢
作者: craigzhang    时间: 2008-9-27 01:42:03

it is so hard for u. very good i should say,except ur english. lol
作者: devilkin_x    时间: 2008-10-24 07:31:46

支持支持 后期做的~声音再近点就好了
作者: evillivedp    时间: 2008-11-17 12:49:32

感觉有点害羞

LZ唱得不错啊,大声吼出来就是了
作者: Desolation    时间: 2009-8-27 11:37:16

有Free哦``这首歌做得真挺好滴
加油``
支持翻迩去!
作者: 慧剑无心    时间: 2009-8-27 20:53:43

看了标题,我只能很遗憾说,其实这首歌只有最后一点点是阿姆唱的...........................




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